From: nickbarnes	Date: January 25th, 2008 11:01 pm (UTC)		(Link)

If ARTW and NHW don't both get this then they're not trying.
And Ed Lemon, for that matter :-)
How about this one?

Sparkle

One will do it, energise
you.
See the wild love in strangers' eyes
you do.
Feel the flow, the joy, shared delight.
We
Twist and turn and bounce through the night,
We do.
Until the dawn leaves us high and dry
in this corner
of some farmer's field
where incurious cows inspect us,
love.

	From: manjushra	Date: January 26th, 2008 11:35 am (UTC)		(Link)

You can't blame the proto-belgians for not getting this. They didn't have lunch with me.

	From: artw	Date: January 26th, 2008 07:21 pm (UTC)		(Link)

Sigh. Defeated.

	From: manjushra	Date: January 26th, 2008 07:25 pm (UTC)		(Link)

A clue: name, in one word, the subject of the poem.

	From: manjushra	Date: January 26th, 2008 07:26 pm (UTC)		(Link)

(btw "apple" is the wrong answer)

From: pwilkinson	Date: January 28th, 2008 07:54 pm (UTC)		(Link)

These are both too transcendental for me to even try to compete.

	From: manjushra	Date: January 28th, 2008 08:33 pm (UTC)		(Link)

but thank you for visiting my planet anyway, Mr. Wilkinson :=)

	From: nickbarnes	Date: January 28th, 2008 10:40 pm (UTC)		(Link)

Do you know this?

From: (Anonymous)	Date: January 29th, 2008 09:47 am (UTC)		(Link)

is it my turn to say doh?